Skip to main content

"Alas, poor Yorick I Knew Him Well"--Shakespeare

Morning All,

Hope every one is doing well. I know the title of this post is a bit odd, but I'm using it as a lead-in:

Black moments. Conflict. Suspense. Chase. These are all important in fiction writing. It's the idea that the main character(s) have to accomplish something, overcome something to make the story move forward--be something that a reader will want to read--and maybe even read again and again.

So what stories have the best black moments? Is it the ones where you fear for the character's life? Or the moment where it looks like "all is lost"?

The black moments are something I struggle with. I don't want to get cliched about conflict. Or do the themes that have been done so often that it bores readers. So what makes something different--fresh, fascinating?

In reading Debbie Viguie's (accent on the "e" in her last name), Scarlet Moon, she took a well known (and often loved) story (Little Red Riding Hood), turned it on its ear, and flipped it so the wolf was something more than just a wolf deceiving a young girl.

In Disney's movie, Enchanted, the girl (the would-be princess), Giselle (played by Amy Adams) says that actually Red was chasing the wolf. When the little girl says "I've never heard that version before." Giselle answers, "That's because Red tells it a little differently."

In both instances, something that might have been told to the point of exhaustion is changed. The black moment is different, it's a new story. A new way to care, or not care about, the characters involved.

Either way you take it, a black moment can be subtle, or large and frightening. Or something as recognizable as heartbreak. Whatever black moment any of us have in our stories, we have to make it so that the reader cares about the outcome. Even if this means you have a Hamlet talking to a skull. (Like Shakespeare did).

Have A Tremendous Tuesday!

Comments

Great post! I love the way you approached this topic, and your examples were perfect. Thanks, Bethany! :-)
Anonymous said…
Shannon,

Thank YOU. :-)

Popular posts from this blog

Gregori Celebrates My Birthday

Happy Tuesday All, ****CONTEST IS NOW CLOSED**** In honor of my birthday (that was on Oct. 15th) I am doing TWO give aways! The FIRST one is TODAY!  Today's give away is a copy of Kerrelyn Sparks' Sexiest Vampire Alive . Kerrelyn, being the awesome person that she is, has agreed to give a signed copy of the novel to ONE lucky commenter on my blog. Here's how it's going to work and please read all instructions CAREFULLY. ONE entry PER person : If you choose to email in your entry: Email to this email ONLY .  Your email should state who your favorite vampire is. And no, it does NOT have to be one of Kerrelyn Sparks' characters, but that would be really cool if you DID mention one of hers. If you choose to enter by commenting on my blog: Leave your FIRST name, email address, and what vampire is your favorite. It can be ANY vampire--but like I said, it would be really cool if you mention a Kerrelyn Sparks' vampire. You don't know Kerrelyn Spa...

Spotlight On Author: Kerrelyn Sparks

Happy Friday Everybody, THE CONTEST PORTION OF THIS AUTHOR INTERVIEW IS NOW OFFICIALLY CLOSED. Finally! I get to post the interview with Kerrelyn Sparks . I was planning to last Friday, but unfortunately my computer had issues. I have been enjoying Kerrelyn's books for awhile now, but I had the pleasure of meeting her recently at one of her book signings. She is incredibly nice, funny, encouraging and a delight to be around. You, my dear readers, have a special treat today. Not only do you get this awesome interview to read, but if you leave a comment in the comment section (with your first name and email address--I won't be able to contact you if you're the winner if you don't leave your email address) I'll put your name and email address in my contest box for Friday night's drawing for a chance to win Kerrelyn Sparks' Be Still My Vampire Heart . Below (after the interview) you'll see the rules of how to enter, please read them carefully. So...

Spotlight On Author: Loretta Wheeler

Happy Tuesday Everyone, There's a gem of an author I've had the privilege of coming across...I'm talking about my friend, Loretta Wheeler. She's a sweetheart and very talented author. I enjoyed her YA Paranormal novella, The Pan Man immensely. And, she also writes Romance. So without further ado, come into my parlor and meet Loretta Wheeler: Me:  In your YA novelette, The Pan Man , you mention Pan's looking for his long lost soul mate. What made you choose Pan out of all the Greek/Roman gods and goddesses? Loretta:  I chose the Greek god Pan, because of the connection with the music. I found later on in the story, (my stories take over and write themselves usually) it applied even more than I realized because of the band's name. I won't mention the name of the band in here, because it's part of the surprise ending. Me:  You're mostly known for your Romance stories. How would you describe your writing style? Hot, suspenseful, sensual, sw...